Mercury Man
Mercury Man is the super villain that no one can catch. His silver-white color allows him to camouflage himself deeply into the city, which is mainly depicted in silver or white colors. The city is mainly always 70 degrees, in which Mercury Man stays in his usual state, liquid. This allow him to get around quickly and slide away from the law. Mercury Man has been around seen ancient times, specifically to ancient China and Egypt. He can quickly turn from liquid to a solid, just by pressing a button on his belt. If he is ever caught in a sticky situation where he is about to be caught, he can either convert to liquid or he can shoot liquid mercury out of his mouth and it will give anyone that comes in contact with it, instant poisoning. In his solid form, he surfs around town on a surf board, and whips past everyone. However, one negative to Mercury Man is that when he shoots someone with his mercury blast, even innocent bystanders will be infected with the poisoning, and will die.
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ReplyDeleteREEEEDDDDDDD! I really liked your story because you showed multiple super powers that make him evil and your mercury man picture was cool. There is not much to improve your story on other than him not having a weakness. Overall it was a really good story and realistic to the actual information on mercury.
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ReplyDeletethis story was very good reed and it gave some really good information about Mercury. i think you could inproove this story by inserting a plot
ReplyDeleteReed your facts were very well thought out and i enjoyed the way you incorporated them into your story but i would have liked to see more of a story line/ plot.
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